大陆的轨迹

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（括号里是我觉得更好的翻译，在句式和韵律方面，L的翻译更好些。） 

明天，把窗户打开                          Tomorrow, open the window,

把夜里卸下的暖气罩 嵌回墙壁           return the lid of the heater, discharged through the night, to the wall,

在窗户上呼一口气测试温度               test the air（temperature）with a sniff at the window,

回想昨夜陌生人的面孔和名字            remember the faces and names of last night's strangers,

猜测他们之间隐秘的联系                 take a guess at their hidden relations,

他们宣示的快乐 和挂在脖子上的妥协  their promised (demonstrated) merriness (happiness), the compromise weighing them down (hanged on their necks).

明天，感谢清洁工在黎明之前            Tomorrow, say thanks to the cleaner who before daybreak

将落叶和塑料袋清扫干净                  got rid of the fallen leaves and the plasticbags,

感谢小贩把水果和蔬菜洗净 摆放整齐   say thanks to the peddler who cleanly prepared fruit and vegetable for decoration （and put them in line）,

感谢所有人在七点之前到达办公室       say thanks to everybody who arrives before seven to their desks,

像不会背叛笼子的信鸽                    like carrier pigeons unable to betray their home cage.

明天，在清晨的冷雾里打哈欠            Tomorrow, give a yawn, let the jaw send a fine crackle

颌骨发出细碎声音                          into the chilly morning fog.

每一个走出地铁的人                       All the people coming out of the subway,

你想拥抱他们                               you want to hug every one of them,

而他们飘摇不定 即刻散去                but they flow by in a never-ending wave and disperse right away.