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2007-03-29
Thomas (III) 托马斯（之三） - [诗与歌]
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2004-9-18 Beijing
China fell today 中国陷落
Sixty-seven years ago 67年之前，今日
Good weather, although 好天气，虽然
Grass was succumbing to the chill of northern nights 青草正在北方寒夜中屈身
No one knew how fast the guns were approaching him 没人知道枪炮逼近他的速度
And the one thousand faces of war 没人知道战争的一千副面孔
Women show their lovers 女人向爱人展现
The strongest affection 最强烈的情感
When their hearts start to dry up 当她们的心开始枯萎之时
Like a declaration of peace before the war 就像两个敌国，在战前
Between two enemy states 发布的和平声明
It’s so quiet and dark out there. 窗外安静黑暗如斯
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评论
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Yes, to me it is a more suiting metaphor, though the idea came from a coincidence.
I thought "loose" was a word for women who allow themselves to be conquered by men, not for women who are sexually aggressive...
Very interesting how you use him rather than her and liken Japan to a woman (though by the plural lovers, a loose woman too!) China a man.